Seeing the so-called 7-star hotel against the vibrantly clear blue water as the wind blows on my face feeling the salt land on my face was an outstanding sensation.
Being on the beach of the purely white sand with no pollution and just clear blue gradient sky as it touches the clouds was eye candy to me. I could see the fish swim across the ocean and the hot rays of the sun sinking its vitamin D into my back causing the burning of my skin was all worth it.
Entering the modernistic hotel with the golden waterfall expressing how lavish and luxurious the hotel was is mesmerizing. Sitting at the dinner table looking around as I see a ginormous fish tank with all types of marine life including sharks was flabbergasting.
I liked this blog because it had a good capture of imagery and details of how the place you are at looks and feels. However, you do not mention where the place is or where you are. Other then that you have a great choice of vocabulary, strong english, and a good sense of imagery.
ReplyDelete- The writer captured the technique because he/she used a similar writing style to the author of the Lahore passage. He/she used first person experiences and details to paint the picture.
ReplyDelete- They could have not used such cliche words such as flabbergasting and mesmerizing. That could just be my opinion but it feels forced in a way because it seems like you are just putting the words there to make it seem more formal than it is.
- The blog elements project a feeling of surprise and the author uses that emotion very well throughout the passage by describing all the different things that made them surprised in detail.