A bell sounded in the distance 8 booms vibrated in the chilly air the infamous Big Ben had awoken and with it the rest of the city as well.
I had arrived at this fine city on a Sunday evening going straight to my hotel and falling asleep missing the beauty of the London skyline at night but it didn't matter I would get to experience the life of the city tonight.
Stepping out onto the streets of the city was breathtaking from the heated air in the hotel to the chilly air off London hitting you in the face. The smell of family-run bakeries making their own special bread to the hundreds of people walking by rushing to get to work on time. The streets despite being so busy in the morning were vibrant and lively everyone had a smile on their face a genuine smile.
This blog successfully captured the writer's technique and voice. It used a lot of imagery in describing the new city. Thus, readers would be able to picture themselves there. It also had an attention-grabbing title, and short paragraphs as blogs should have.
ReplyDeleteWith this blog, imagery was very well shown and you could feel and picture the imagery which I liked. I like how the title mentioned where the blog took place so it could grab the readers eye. It was a very light and friendly blog which was also really nice.
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ReplyDeleteThis blog post lives up to the title. It is full of detailed imagery making me feel as if I were in London. The writer successfully illustrates London's atmosphere as well ass the complex feeling of witnessing London's skyline. It is short and compact with detail as a blog post should be
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