Anchorage,
the largest city in Alaska. The gateway to the friendly wilderness in
Alaska.
It was
springtime and the weather was just starting to get warmer. The Sun was shining
and melting the icy cold snow. The wind blew against my face as I was walking
to my car. The birds were chirping and it was music to my ears.
I started
to drive around on the unpaved rocky roads to Denali ; A national wild park
engraved with Alaska’s rich culture.
I arrived
at the park and I was surrounded by tall and strong trees with a full head of
hair. The sun-kissed flowers were blooming and looked ready for summer. I
couldn’t help but notice how pleasant I felt admiring the nature around me.
Blog Commentary:
ReplyDeleteThe blog post is supposed to have a nostalgic view of the place. I think an easier way to write this out would be resonating with a childhood memory (like the author did) and why it is special. Your detail into Anchorage is on point but I think the way that used the description of the place needs a bit more understanding.
- Did the writer capture voice/technique?
ReplyDelete= I think the write if this blog did, capturing a lot of their feelings while in their special place
- What could the writer have done better?
= I think the writer could have captured more of the persons past and history in this blog.
-Blog Elements present?
= First person, easily understood, lot of imagery, active voice