That is something I can never get tired of living here; the drive people have for wanting to live in the busiest city in the world.
Thursday, November 18, 2021
The busiest city in the world.
The harsh winds felt cool and fresh, yet my face still puckered up when the breeze hit me; I knew I was finally home. The sounds of the taxi's horns and beeping soon welcomed me home after leaving the doors outside the airport. I tried to call one but no one batted an eye. Has it really been that long since I've been here? I was returning from my home country, Lahore, and the sudden change of people, scenery, and even the smell, was too much for me. I felt overburdened with all the loud noises from the people yelling, and the cars driving off with new people that are full of hope and inspiration to start something new here.
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It did not sound like the author wrote it, there was no literary devices used.
ReplyDeleteShould have multiple paragraphs, more in-depth on how to city impacts.
Some elements does not have a strong purpose.
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ReplyDelete- The writer captured the active voice but it didn't really sound like the author of Lahore wrote it.
ReplyDelete- Should've described how the city impacts more and compared it a little to Lahore
- Uses devices but some don't really have a good purpose.
Great description but does not feel authentic enough, lacks purpose.
ReplyDeleteThis was a great entry, and was very descriptive. One thing to note is that this post did not feel like the original author's post, it felt like a separate author. Although descriptive, there wasn't so much use of imagery, one thing the original author used. There is a mention of a change in scenery, so one thing to work on would be describing that scenery. What do you see? What do you hear? What do you feel?
ReplyDeleteit didn't sound like the author wrote this because there wasn't much literary devices used. it should also have more paragraphs rather than one big one. Doesn't have much purpose either, but good idea it was unique.
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