Finally accepting Lahore for who she is, I can finally let go of her and continue seeing other cities. I decided to go to Maracas to start a new chapter. Me and maracas got along very well right at the start. She surprises me by leading me to restaurants with scents of cinnamon and ovens when I'm feeling hungry. Her people are very friendly and open about life in Maracas. Maracas always has what I desire, and she never gets old.
Her lands are as green as the seaweed seen so clearly in her waters. I wake up to her fresh air blowing through my face, and the sticky feeling of my skin after enjoying her waters. Each part of Maracas is precious and pure, I could never get sick of her. In her multiple vacancies, I feel at home although really it was my first time staying. All her qualities make up the girl I know and love, reminding me of a certain someone. I haven’t had this much fun in a while.
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The writer did capture the authors voice by using the same style of calling the city "his love". It recreates the style he uses to show what the city means to the author. The use of imagery was great. The paragraphs could be shorter as blogs usually have shorter lengthen paragraphs.
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