As I step out on the balcony of my hotel room, I'm greeted with the intoxicatingly beautiful smell of Miami. For a while since I've been living here this place finally feels like home. The tranquility, peace, and calmness overtakes me and I'm brought back to my childhood. The nostalgia of being able to feel free and at harmony like when I was ten sitting at my porch after a long day.
It's an early morning, a freshly made cup of cuban coffee in my hands as I sat down on the chairs. The wind called my name as I closed my eyes and let it engulf me.
It is the beginning of October and while it is still warm out here in Miami, the mornings are becoming more breezy. The colder the weather gets the more I reminisce my life back then where everything was reposed and quiet.
The writer did capture the authors voice as it uses similar techniques as the author. The writer could have made the shape of the reading shorter as blogs tend to have short paragraphs. Blog elements are present as the style is in first person and uses imagery and personification.
ReplyDeleteThe writer was able to write a successful blog following many of the typical elements and language. Some elements present are imagery and first person point of view. If there's one thing to improve it would be making the paragraphs shorter and more concise. However, it was captured the voice of the original author and played into the emotions.
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